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29
Apr 2008
Something I wrote
Posted in General by Ali at 2:39 pm |

Hey dear ones,

Finally got some time to chill after a fantastic show last night in Dubai. Going to watch the movie “21″ with  friends.

Wanted to share something I wrote. It’s dedicated to those who find me worthy of their love.

“When the wind chimes sing my song;

  And the devil speaks of no wrong.

  When the morning star shines brighter;

  And your quiet soul feels lighter

  When all questions are answered;

  And all arts are mastered

  When all embrace the same faith;

  And calendars bear just one date

  When death will not stand in the way;

  And life will never be astray

  When the unreachable stands near;

  And children sleep without fear

  Thats the day i’ll come back into this world;

  So when i’m gone, shed no tear!


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20 Responses:

Ruba said:

I absolutely LOVED it. I write such poems too, whenever I have the time and the ‘mood’. I’d love to hear more from you. More of, straight from your heart.

It’s funny, because I think you Just posted this =)

Looking forward to reading more of your work!

These lines really did stike a cord here:

”When all embrace the same faith;

And the calendars bear just one date”’

Beautiful words.


xoangelxo said:

WOW!…dats all i have to say..:D

Hope you had fun at the concert…if possible..tell us more about it!…

Take care and keep singing-n-writting :D

BYe


Bristi said:

…wow!!!
… the depth in this poems are very deep … i love your writing style. the one thing is the most amazing to me about this poem is that it has a nice flow. and thank you for the poem!

You are such a wonderful Artist…May allah help you always in every way..Allah(SWT) gave you such a wonderful voice…masahallah.

Enjoyed to reading your blog…keep writing…
Take care


asmajaved67 said:

absolutly loved it.. i also write poems and Shiary in my spare time.. which is about once in a week… now abt ur poem… its really touchy and very in depth. absoutely amazing poem.. i am gonna write it down in may Diary for sure… wid ur pic in it..;)


Tahsina said:

Hey,
Yay! You used rhyming couplets, I love that technique, always gets me reading for more for some odd reason. That was a great poem, my first response was ‘Wow! That was really good…’. My favourite lines were:

” When the morning star shines brighter;
And your quiet soul feels lighter”

AND

“When the unreachable stands near;
And children sleep without fear”

I saw your pictures at the Dubai gig and you looked really amazing, as usual! Hope you had a fantastic time. I’ve also watched 21, I liked it, I expected it to be quite boring but it kept me on my seat which is always a good thing, lol.

The Pakistan Indepedence Festival was on the tele today, it was so good to go over the excitement and adrenaline pump feeling I had on that I day I saw you perform. You were so awesome, and your hair was so cool! Me and my sister were singing along, but I got majorly excited when Masty and Dekha came up, haha!

Hope your doing well and PLEASE do a tour in the UK soon, that would make my year!

Tahsina =)


lilpixie said:

Its great to hear from you every now n’ then. I love reading your blogs because they show a side of you that is apart from the “Popularity” world. Your Blogs show that your a very down to earth person, and you haven’t let Popularity go to your head! Keep this up! You ROCK as a person! and certainly Rule as a singer! My prayers Are Always with you! :)


pakiprincess-x said:

O.M.G that is a wower. i love your rhymes…. its kewl to hear from u so often…..lol i guess now im the one losing track of your comments. u must feel blessed with talents like painting and singing Mashallah
hope to see u in bahrain sometime
luv iqra


udit_2504 said:

hi ali zafar………..i m udit……….ur fan from india……….
i have 1 question………don’t u like ur fans in indai……..i know u like us………but why don’t u come here to perform…………we all miss u………
when is your new album coming??????i m curious
and u have written a very nice poem……..n i have composed it on my guitar…………….
altough,my mom says the composition is worst she has ever heard………
keep rocking n always remember that in india u have a huge fan following……….n we all miss u


Sinc3r3lyours said:

I’m sure your show in Dubai was awesome.
cant wait till your back in the US to perform for us..we miss you!
and the poem is stunning, i enjoyed it immensely, definitely worthy of some love :)


inavars said:

Absolutely beautiful, Ali!!


Ali said:

Thanks guys . Udit i’m planning to come to bombay in june . Why dont you rough record the composition and upload it . Would love to hear it .tc


udit_2504 said:

thnks a lot ”ALI”,for having a look at my post and giving such a beautiful reply(u can’t imagine how happy i m,rite now)………this time i m not able to upload it……….but soon i’ll come up with it……..u do so much for us,so definately i’ll do it for u…….but before that i need to practice a lot more on my guitar……..
and thnx again for coming to india,i’ll be there in your concert………i m excited about it
thnk you “ALI ZAFAR“……….u r the best celeb in this world…….
AZ ROCKS!!!!!!!


nadjangel7 said:

wow thats a great poem Ali… The first word that came to my mind when i finish read it is ” genius”… U are very talented… Masha Allah Love this poem… Its very beautiful. I have written a poem for u in my comments to MR MEGA. its not as beautiful as urs but it came deep from my heart . i hope u’l like it..

Keep Rocking

Take care
Nazia


priya_cutie said:

WoooooooooooooooooooooooooW!!!

Ali! this is a nice poetry, which I have enjoyed very much. I

really enjoyed the line, “When the unreachable stands near”,

Wat a thought yaar! U kno I gone crazy abt. ur paintings,

songs, ur voice and now ur poetries. Kya baat hai!!! Va Va!!!

Maasha Allah!

Take care & keep good health!


priya_cutie said:

Hey Ali!!! Would u listen 2 my own written poetry, please?

Aap ho pakistan mein
Aur
Hum hain hindustan mein
Karte hain hum aapke intezaar
Kyun ki
Hum ko hai intezaar
Aap ki concert sun ne ki
Hum hai bekaraar!!!

Please tell me howzattttttt!!!! :)


blahblahblahxx3 said:

i ♥ u.


Ksa-ian said:

Really nice Ali, its very touching and has deep meaning. Pls do sharing more of ur own writings. God bless =)


Ali said:

priya cutie . that was funny :)


priya_cutie said:

Why? Ali?????????????????????

Is it so funny :(


priya_cutie said:

I didn’t expected this! :( I am hurted!
Mera poetry itna bhi buri nahin thi, na?

Anyways, Always with good hopes and hapennings :)

Take care :) See u soon.


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